Death to a Silly Limerick
https://metalflowermaker.wordpress.com/2015/02/22/poetry-challenge-poetic-disobedience/
A yada da dada da bada
A bada da cada da cada
B well be swell
B closer to hell
A dada da fada da mada
I shall need a doctor’s excuse
This limerick has become a noose
Surely I have become sick
I want to throw up in a tip
That’s it I’m calling a truce.
Someone please make it stop
This gibberish is really a flop
I can’t stop giggling
My minds just a wriggling
Without end my brain will pop.
This poetic device should be fun
Honestly, I’m dying to run
I question my existence
I’ve lost my resistance
I’d rather admit I’m outdone.
Writing has made me belligerent
I put myself in this predicament
I’ll shift the blame to a stink bug
That’s drowned itself in my water mug
Fate tells me that was no accident.
A dada da dada da dada
A bada ba bada ba bada
B still be well
B the limerick’s farewell
A cada ca cada ca cada
This blogger can write a limerick:
http://poetreecreations.org/how-to-write-a-limerick/
Amanuensis Sobriquet-Reverie 
happy dance happy dance, I love it! stink bugs, yea. Let’s see, next it needs music and a very very serious that morphs into stupid interpretive dance…..
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How did you know I do interpretive dance when I feed my daughter. I’m going to have to sing her limericks now.
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“down on the banks of the hankey pank
where the bullfrog jumps from bank to bank
with a splish a splash and a belly flop
little missed and went kerplop”
I bounce child and “drop” them part way with the kerplop…. once they get the idea they love it.
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Cool fun, I’ll try this with my munchkin.
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…I know a bunch of them….
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What are you doing up at five am? Offering to help edit my epic hero ballad? I should have a shag wig and rename myself, “Tawny” Kitaen.
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you are west coast too. I’m in Washington, Olympic Peninsula. My sleep has been weird since I got sick in May last year — I sleep normal length of time but if stressed I want to go to sleep at 8 pm. I did family practice obstetrics for 18 years, so I don’t worry if I get up at some weird hour…..
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No, I’m in Ohio. I just think in alternate timezones, calculating forward or backwards from EST, as needed. When exhausted, I go to bed some days at 6, 7 or 8pm.
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Had to work on flash fiction chain six, part 17: https://drkottaway.wordpress.com/2015/02/24/the-wedding-bells-part-17-flash-fiction-chain-number-6/
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Just read it. Fun to be a part of a chain story.
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mine is a mermaid heroine… dang that apollo, he’s such a slut. Most of those gods were. who is your hero?
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My unnamed hero is young boy turned young adult. Human, flawed, haunted, redeemed so far I have encountered redundancy, like in a bad eighties’ song. I have three versions. Each worse, than the last. I had an idea for an epic type of hero, but without deities it kinda falls flat.
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….so you need a deity? What’s wrong with that? I’m thinking of “Good Omens” where pollution had replaced plague in the four horseman….
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I had forgotten about that. I’ve posted my poetic disobedience, now I’m about to post my catastophic epic hero attempts in one draft.
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oh, good….
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Flailing poetry through poetic disobedience to an extreme.
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ROFL
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Thanks for reading this!
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So much fun this was to read! 😀
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Thank you so much.
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